Decent.
Your better than some of the other people on newgrounds but you still have room for improvement.
Decent.
Your better than some of the other people on newgrounds but you still have room for improvement.
Good job!
Nice job with the first episode. As previous people have said the text is somewhat annoying but I like how its coded to work out. The pilot left a good impression on me and that's always a good thing.
The music was a problem for me. But then I checked a Newghrounds Flash Tutorial and it really helped me alot.
Poor
The whole thing was poorly done. Animation requires patients and if you had some you would have spent the time to do it right.
It's simple, I love storytelling. I love watching an idea spring forth and, through the process of the talented and passionate, become something that can leave an emotional impact. I guess I like to manipulate emotions. Oh and I voice act too.
Age 29, Male
Student, Server Host
Crystal River High School
Florida, United States
Joined on 10/31/10